I normally focus on science topics, but since none of the other moderators have picked this up I've given it a look. Could you please make these changes:
Change the title to "Contradictions between the two Genesis creation stories".
Change the first paragraph to read:
I'd like to discuss contradictions between the two creation stories found in Genesis 1 and 2. I have listed the contradictions below (not in order):
In the following paragraphs, change the word "indication" to "contradiction" or some other synonym. Your current terminology makes them to be "indications of contradictions", but you're better off just calling them contradictions.
Post a reply to this when you're done editing your opening post and I'll take another look.