If you're willing to continue making edits then I'll be glad to keep giving you feedback. Let's first focus on paragraph 1:
Symansu writes:
In mainstream science what you do, is to try to find the initial conditions from where it's 100 percent likely someting would be, finding efficient causes along the way.
Since you're trying to describe mainstream science, you really want to describe it in a way that is recognizably mainstream science. Try giving the
Wikipedia article on Science a read and see if that helps you improve your first paragraph so that it actually describes a summary view of mainstream science. There's a section on the scientific method.
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