There's a whole lot of stuff in there that you take for granted and you do not attempt to justify your conclusions to others.
For example, this particular claim is confusing:
So you see life is a cycle of life and death; it's a perfect creation.
This is difficult to accept, given that death was not originally part of creation, and only entered because of mankind's sin. Thus, you are claiming that God created sin as part of His perfect creation, this does not make sense at all.