Yes, much clearer, very nice.
Now please help me understand what point you're making with this:
Is it the "ice cores are no good" that is the key portion? Or the part about Mann? Both? In any case, is it your interpretation that the author is saying ice core dating is no good? And anyone without intimate knowledge of climategate isn't going to know what part Mann played, so you need to fill in the details. Sorry to string this out on you, but there's just not enough context yet. I just spent 15 minutes reading about Mann so I could figure out what point you were trying to make, and I'm still not sure.
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