brennakimi,
I think this would be an interesting subject, but I have some suggestions.
1. Stick to one topic. Either Roots of Proselytizing or The Need to Find Cures. I don't feel they are the same.
2. Please correct typos and incorrect spelling. (First impressions and all)
3. If you choose Proselytizing, I think it would go well in Comparative Religions, since there are different conversion techniques. If "The Need to Find Cures" then Coffee House.
4. Can you rework the OP into a more detached presentation. Right now your OP has an "in your face" tone.
5. Leave out reference to Faith, we don't need to know your inspiration.
6. Leave out the word "crap."
Emotions on the board seem to be running high right now and I think you would have a better chance at a productive discussion if you lowered the emotional level of your presentation.
Make sense?
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