old proof of evolution

My impression is that your message 1 just doesn't have any coherence to it.I don't really have a good answer for you (I myself don't know if I can write a good message 1 for a new topic).My stab at helping is:Look at your content. What is the general theme of the message? That should be the topic title (which can be changed via editing message 1). The current title, "old proof of evolution", is generic to the point of being pretty worthless.Then the message should be broken down into paragraphs, with each paragraph having its own sub-theme.Sylas has the reputation of being one of the masters of writing a good message. Perhaps looking as some of his may be useful. See http://EvC Forum: Information -->EvC Forum: Information.I encourage you to use a new message in this topic, to be your revised effort. If and when approved, that individual message (even if not message 1) can become the message 1 of the released version.OK - Pretty crappy job at trying to help. Once again I must plead being a pinhead moose.Suggestions from other admins?Adminnemooseus