The problem I see is that the article was written for the purpose of easy-to-digest. Like I said before, the points made by the article aren't exactly wrong. They're just not the whole story. If the author wanted to make it more clear, he would have gone much more into detail. I'm not sure if the end result would be as easy to digest as the current version.
Take the fossil record, for example. Does the average person in the Philippines actually know what fossil is? Heck, does the average person in the USA know what a fossil is?
Now that I think about it, I don't think the author could have done that much more than what he wrote.