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There are also comets, which are stars having a solid and irregular core made up of gravels, ice and dust.
We English speaking people don't usually refer to comets as "stars."
It looks pretty good. However, since it is so general, there isn't much critique I can think of.
Here is a suggestion. You can describe the mechanics of our solar system, such as the direction of the planets' orbits, and use that to support the current model of the formation of our solar system. You can also explain how the composition of the inner planets (being rocky) and the composition of the outer planets (being gasseous) fits in perfectly with our model.
This message has been edited by Darth Mal, 09-17-2004 11:01 PM
The Laminator
We are the bog. Resistance is voltage over current.
For goodness's sake, please vote Democrat this November!